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| Lynxy |
 Posted: Thu Jun 11, 2009 1:20 am Post subject: Late For Mother Contest |
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I'd like to share my new photos with you and to hear some criticism if it is  I've shot them today... These photos really remind me my childhood and my mother in those days, especially the second one.
The 1st is something between them, uniting them in the whole world and it's in every action and glance.
The 3rd is spontaneous movement and side glance and I love it as the whole shot.
I hope you'll like it!
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Aleksandra |
| Posted: Sun Jun 14, 2009 5:59 pm Post subject: |
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Lynxy, thanks for sharing! Very nice photos. Some kind of past time looks good.
One thing I want to offer is to reshoot the 1st image horizontally to leave some space on each side.
The 2nd seems to be better with the upper angle of view, because I almost don't see the main subject. And here maybe it's better to avoid center, try to hide the left part - if it looks better?
The 3rd is interesting for it's composition. The position of her arm is both protecting and caring and with the other arm it creates a frame for her child. Central composition is ok here, I think.
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| Lynxy |
| Posted: Tue Jun 16, 2009 1:03 am Post subject: |
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Thank you very much!
Though I prefer to leave the 1st in horizontal position... but maybe it would be better with more space.
And the 2nd seems better if cropped.
Thank you once more!
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